Andrew 10-2-23

 Today we went over how to right a paragraph in an essay. First you need to make a claim then write give two pieces of evidence and then explain the evidence. Then we wrote one ourselves, I wrote one about how Troy tore his family apart by cheating. I feel like this helped me understand more about writing an essay because Mr. Tease pointed out it was a fact that he did it and not really a claim because it is already proven.